A Children's Story

Are you a parent/work with children/write for children etc? I wonder if you would take some time to read my idea for a picture book on my 'Write It!' page, and let me know what you think?
The story is entitled: The Monsters in the Night.

For children their imagination can be very vivid, with monsters around very corner. I'm sure most of us can recall a time when very young; where we have been scared of what could be lurking in the dark.
I wrote the story to help parents and children talk about night-time fears and ways to over come them.
It would be amazing to receive some true feedback.